Whispers Shape Distant Tomorrows by Aren Cole Vale
1. Opening Rumors and Cruel Whispers
Chapter 1 begins with harsh gossip spreading among servants and onlookers about Lady Margaery Wallen, who has been imprisoned for three days in the firewood shed of the Chancellor’s estate.
The whispers are filled with cruelty rather than concern:
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Some speculate she may have died.
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Others claim she deserves death.
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Some even suggest punishing her further.
These opening lines immediately establish the hostility surrounding Margaery and foreshadow the injustice she faces. Sympathy is absent; judgment and resentment dominate the atmosphere.
2. The Firewood Shed: A Place of Suffering
Inside the firewood shed, the true condition of Margaery is revealed.
She is:
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Young (only fifteen or sixteen)
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Curled up in pain
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Shivering violently
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Physically filthy and exhausted
Her once-beautiful clothing is torn and soiled. Her butterfly hairpin, a symbol of innocence and femininity, is gone. Her hair is tangled with mud, emphasizing how completely she has been stripped of dignity.
The shed symbolizes abandonment, punishment, and emotional exile.
3. Awakening from Death: The Shock of Rebirth
Margaery wakes up screaming in terror, desperately shouting that she is innocent.
At first, she is confused—she believes she should be dead.
Memories of her brutal past life surface:
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Her eldest brother Joshua cut out her tongue.
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Her second brother Avery poisoned her.
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Her fifth brother Andrew crippled her by cutting off her legs.
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Her fourth brother Clyde cast her out.
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She sacrificed herself for Tessa.
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Her third brother Russell disposed of her corpse in an icy pond.
These memories reveal a horrifying truth:
Margaery was destroyed by the very family she loved.
Her survival now is not escape—it is rebirth.
4. Realization of the Past Timeline
Margaery slowly realizes she has returned to the past, to the time when she was imprisoned in the firewood shed.
In her previous life:
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She had been confined there for an entire month.
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The cold caused severe rheumatism.
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The illness tormented her for three long years.
The realization that she has returned before her ultimate destruction shocks her deeply. She never imagined rebirth or a second chance.
Her bitter smile reflects disillusionment, not hope.
5. Margaery’s Identity and Family Background
Margaery recalls her origins:
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She is the legitimate daughter of Raul Wallen, Chancellor of the estate.
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Her mother died during childbirth.
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She was born premature and weak.
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She was once treasured as the family’s only daughter.
Her father promised her protection and declared her the family’s “little princess.”
However, these promises were empty.
Despite her belief in their words, her family became her greatest tormentors.
6. The Illusion of Family Love
Margaery remembers how desperately she tried to earn her family’s love:
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She obeyed them.
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She sacrificed for them.
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She tolerated humiliation.
Yet, all her loyalty was rewarded with betrayal and death.
Her past life teaches her a painful lesson:
Unconditional love does not exist in her family.
This realization fuels her determination to sever emotional ties in this life.
7. A New Resolve: Choosing Herself
Unlike her previous life, Margaery now makes a firm decision:
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She will no longer beg for affection.
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She will no longer sacrifice herself for others.
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She will carve her own future.
This marks a crucial turning point in her character—from self-sacrificing victim to emotionally awakened survivor.
8. Avery Wallen’s Arrival
The sound of footsteps interrupts her thoughts.
Her second brother Avery Wallen enters, carrying herbal medicine.
His words are cold and commanding:
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He orders her to take the medicine.
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He demands she apologize to Tessa.
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He insists she beg Tessa to return home.
Despite holding warm medicine, Avery’s behavior is emotionally icy, highlighting the contrast between surface concern and inner cruelty.
9. Avery’s Hypocrisy Revealed
Margaery remembers that Avery once cared for her deeply:
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He secretly brought her medicine.
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He worried about her health.
But everything changed after Tessa’s arrival.
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He only cares about Tessa’s ailments.
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He ignores Margaery’s allergies.
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He overlooks the rashes covering her body.
His concern is selective, revealing how completely Margaery has been replaced.
10. The Threat of Expulsion
Avery delivers a devastating ultimatum:
If Margaery refuses to apologize, their father will expel her from the family.
In her previous life, these words crushed her.
She reacted with desperation and threats of self-harm.
Instead of sympathy, she gained:
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A ruined reputation
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A label as a madwoman
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Public humiliation
This memory strengthens her resolve not to repeat her mistakes.
11. Avery’s Accusations and Tessa’s “Kindness”
Avery grows angrier, accusing Margaery of being ungrateful.
He claims:
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Tessa knelt in the cold for Margaery’s sake.
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Tessa caught a cold because of her.
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Tessa is gentle and forgiving.
He insists that if Margaery apologizes, everything will return to normal.
These words expose the family’s blind favoritism toward Tessa.
12. Tessa’s Arrival and Displacement
Margaery reflects on how her life changed after Tessa appeared.
Tessa:
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Was a long-lost daughter.
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Became the family’s emotional focus.
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Received overwhelming affection.
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Inspired guilt and overcompensation from the family.
Even Margaery’s fiancé shifted his loyalty to Tessa.
Margaery became invisible.
13. False Guilt and Manipulation
Though Margaery initially tried to accept Tessa, she slowly realized:
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Tessa wanted not just love, but her position.
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Tessa wanted her identity.
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Tessa wanted to erase her existence.
The alleged accident—the fall from the artificial mountain—was Tessa’s fabrication, yet Margaery was blamed without question.
14. Acceptance Without Illusion
Margaery agrees to apologize—not out of guilt, but clarity.
She no longer believes her family cares.
She no longer hopes for justice.
Her compliance is strategic, not submissive.
15. Memory of Humiliation
She recalls kneeling in the snow, begging her father not to recognize Tessa as his daughter.
Instead of comfort, she was:
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Locked in the shed
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Forced to apologize
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Publicly humiliated
This memory seals her emotional detachment.
16. Emotional Detachment and Inner Strength
Margaery decides:
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Apologies mean nothing.
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Truth does not matter.
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Their love is conditional and false.
Freedom is her only goal.
She refuses to argue or explain herself again.
17. Physical Pain and Quiet Endurance
Ignoring Avery, Margaery forces herself to stand using a wooden stick.
Her knees ache terribly, a reminder of past suffering.
Yet her face shows no emotion.
This quiet endurance marks her transformation—she no longer seeks validation.
18. Avery’s Final Question
Avery blocks her path and asks the question that defines her fate:
“Did you push Tessa down the artificial mountain?”
This accusation hangs unresolved, symbolizing:
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Injustice
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Bias
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The beginning of greater conflict
19. Major Themes Introduced
This chapter introduces powerful themes:
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Rebirth and Second Chances
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Family Betrayal
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Identity Erasure
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Manipulation and False Innocence
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Emotional Neglect
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Self-Liberation
20. Conclusion: A Silent Rebellion Begins
Chapter 1 ends not with confrontation, but with quiet defiance.
Margaery is no longer the girl who begs.
She is someone who observes, remembers, and prepares.
Her silence is no longer weakness—it is strategy.
This chapter lays the foundation for a story of revenge, independence, and self-reclamation.
