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Applause rattled through the hall as the contestant before me stepped down

I walked to the center of the platform

The screen behind me buzzed once, then flared to life

White light burned at the edge of my vision

My palms were dry; I’d made sure of it

I hadn’t come all this way and worked weeks on four hourssleep a night just to flinch now

I gripped the mic in one hand, the laser pointer in the other

I began

Good afternoon, judges, guests. I’m Mirabelle Vance.” 

I paused just long enough to make them look up

The theme: Evening Gala. Gemstones. Composure. I designed a fourpiece set intended for highprofile, highvisibility events. Mettier, red carpetready. But every clasp, hinge, and suspension curve is engineered for full comfort. Nothing that requires styling glue or double- sided tape to sit right.” 

I clicked the pointer

The ring rotated on the screen

Let’s start with the ring. Cushioncut Ceylon sapphire, 7.8 carats, zero thermal treatment. Cradled in a platinum claw mount. The tapering shank has micropavé spinelsblack, not red -to reduce flare under flash photography. The undergallery’s open to let the stone breathe.” 

Another click

The necklace

This collar piece uses a floating halo design. Twentytwo Colombian emeralds, tensionset between curved titanium bars for flexibility. They follow the line of the collarbone, not the neckline. It moves with the body, not against it. No flipping, no twisting. Even with hair down

Next, the earrings

Tripledrop configuration. Mixed cuts: marquise, pear, and round. Center stones are white zircons, not diamonds. They give a wetter sparkle under LED but stay lighter on the lobe. The hooks are reverseweighted to stop swingback when walking.‘ 

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The bracelet’s a hinged bangle. Center inlay of brushed gold with hexset garnets, chosen for low reflectivity under spotlight glare, Interior lined with medicalgrade silicone. Nonslip. Sweatresistant. You could wear this through a whole gala dinner and forget it’s there.” 

I glanced at Aliénor Dubois

She leaned in, elbows on the table

Her gaze pinned the screen

I finished. Thank you.” 

As the last contestant, no one ushered me off

I stayed in place

The judges began scoring

The ones with styluses muttered to each other, heads bent

One tapped the corner of his screen as if it was unresponsive

I scanned the audience and found Ashton immediately in the second row

His hands came together first

A few people turned

Then more clapping

It spread quickly, like someone had flicked a switch

I didn’t wave; the whole thing was being livestreamed. But I let him see the smile

The secondary screen flickered with slowmoving comments from online viewers

Dubois finally spoke. It’sfine.” 

Nothing else

A long pause

Then the numbers appeared

Eight

Six

Seven

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A hush

Then- 

Octavia spoke

She didn’t bother to lower her voice, or hide the hostility in it

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That last guy’s necklace looked like costume jewelry from a Halloween aisle. You nines. Now she shows actual craftsmanship and you suddenly develop cataracts? Are you taking the piss?” 

gave 

him 

A collective murmur rippled through the room

The livestream chat exploded

I glanced at the screen

The viewer count was jumping in real time

The comments scrolled so fast I had to squint

[What the hell is this scoring?

[Octavia just blew it up. They thought she was here to look pretty. Ha.

[Mirabelle’s work is solid. Actual design logic, not whatever the hell that last entry was.

[Six?! That necklace is museumgrade. This is rigged as fuck.

Dr. Dubois?Octavia’s voice cut through the noise. I’m not a professional designer, sure. But you are. So explain the score. I’m waiting. And I’m not the only one.” 

Aliénor Dubois didn’t answer

She crooked a finger at one of the staff

He jogged over

She leaned in and murmured something

I couldn’t hear it from where I stood

Octavia could

Dr. Dubois?she said, louder this time. Why are you telling them to shut down the livestream?” 

Dubois’s voice cracked the slightest bit. There’s beena technical issue.” 

Octavia turned toward the secondary screen

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The footage streamed as smoothly as ever

Really? Because from here, everything looks perfectly functional. So unless the issueis your 

ego, I suggest you answer my question.” 

The chat feed behind me was boiling

[Is that @MVanceJewels?

[I bought her bracelet. Loved it. No way this is legit

[Bribes. Has to be

[Rigged.

[Rigged

[Rigged.

In the hall, the shouts started out scattered and low

It’s rigged!” 

That score’s a joke!” 

Say it to her face!” 

Chairs scraped

Half the third row stood

Phones shot up

Cameras locked on Dubois

She reached for her mic again

Her hand trembled slightly

Everyone, please, calm down. Scoring is based on each judge’s independent criteria. Some variation is expected-” 

Octavia didn’t even need to raise her voice

Don’t insult us. You gave that walking disaster nine points. Now suddenly you can’t see straight? That’s not a difference of opinion. That’s rigged.” 

Dubois inhaled sharply

Miss Grey, you’re a guest. I’m a qualified adjudicator. You comment on surface appeal. We evaluate across multiple metrics-” 

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Octavia let out a short laugh. Right. Because if I’m not one of you, I must be clueless.” 

She folded her arms. Fine. Then educate us. What are these mysterious metrics? Tell us. Right now.” 

A voice shot out from the back: Yeah, let’s hear it!” 

Another: That was the best design all day!” 

Third: Score or step down!” 

From where I stood, I could see the whole stage

Security clustered near the exits, hesitating

Dubois stared at her hands

The mic shook

We’re taking a tenminute break,she said. We’ll resume soon.” 

“Why?I stepped forward. There’s no segment left. I’m the last contestant. The doesn’t list a break.” 

The crowd roared

The comment feed behind me had probably imploded by now

I didn’t need to look

Dubois spun toward me

Her glare was sharp, desperate

What exactly do you want?” 

program 

I want a real score. I want transparency.I pointed at the screen. My pieces hovered in high- resolution detail, turning slowly under the overhead lights. It’s all right there. Let the audience decide. Let the livestream stay open.” 

Absolutely not!she snapped. The public doesn’t understand technical design. That’s the point of a panel. We’re the standard.” 

Then maybe you’re the problem.I stared straight at her. Because right now, the comment section’s doing a better job than you.” 

She opened her mouth

No sound came out

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